Please Review My Site

[birdman]

Hi

This site is more of a test/practice site. It' a website with a huge article with loads of long tail obscure keywords in it (hence a few spelling mistakes). It's more of a practice site for SEO purposes than anything really, I'm going to see how easy it will be to rank for a bunch of these keywords.

The website is written about something I had issues with in the past that I struggled to find effective helpful info on from the internet. most were just spammy sites trying to push viagra onto you. It was written on the spot from the top of my head.

As I have never done any web design in the past, I had a template to work from, and I am finding wordpress more furstrating than most people let on. I would like suggestions on how to best make this profitable. It will have a few blog posts added to it in the future, also keyword targeted. The main long article on the home page is full of affiliate links. I would like suggestions in terms of the way the site looks and the things I can do for it to make people want to stay and read it more and be more interested in what it has to say. Just general tips on how to make it look better and optimise it for profitability. I know something doesn't look right with the text and background already. I would really value you guys opinions before I carry on.

Depending on general demand I may go on to create a product for this as well. Please be as critical as you want and don't worry about my feelings, feedback is much appreciated.

One last thing, I will not outsource the web design as I do not have the spare money to justify doing this in the first place.

thanks for any feedback guys

Heres the website: Impotence Natural Remedy (http://impotencenaturalremedy.co.uk)

[Screeps]

The appearance of your site isn't too bad. It's just ineffective because there is Too Much INFO!

The first thing I would do is take out that uncomfortable story about your first sexual experience... I understand that others who have ED may have had similar experiences, and you wan't to connect with them, but you are alienating everybody else. And giving away personal information like this just comes across as unprofessional.

You really don't need to write a book to convince people to try your product- the people who are interested already know they need the help. I would just explain about the herbal remedy- stress safety and it being all natural and than feature a few testimonials.


-Zac