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VitaminD
03-20-2008, 03:09 AM
Hey everyone,

I've been working hard these past few weeks and updated the site for a re-launch. I feel like the copy is superior, has focus, and the overall presentation makes more sense from a conversion standpoint. I eliminated a lot of errors and placed a FAQ page up there.

NOT looking for critiques this time: I've already received lots of helpful advice from you all in the past! I'm far enough now that the market has to talk to me.

Some other notes: Don't click "order" to test it out - that's still on the old version, and I'm aware of that. If you can think of FAQ questions, feel free to post them here, I could use some more.

Just let me know of any weird pic problems, HTML issues, dead links, that sort of thing.

90daypianist.com/purple.htm (http://www.90daypianist.com/purple.htm)

Thanks!
VitaminD

Oh yeah: I see "AUDIO SAMPLES" is still there, without the audio samples. Whoops. Ignore that. :)

ANOTHER ONE: "will use laser-focusmaximum speed." no idea...
webgal
03-20-2008, 03:14 AM
No funky page or photo glitches here.
VitaminD
03-20-2008, 03:16 AM
No funky page or photo glitches here.

That's a relief. Thanks! :)
AntonTheKhan
03-20-2008, 03:47 AM
That's a relief. Thanks! :)
Site looks amazing. Copy is 10x better, so is headline. I am tempted to throw a suggestion at you though. In other piano methods, you can assume that people will have full blown videos. Maybe you can address such a possible objection in your copy. Why learning without a video is better or something.
VitaminD
03-20-2008, 03:51 AM
Site looks amazing. Copy is 10x better, so is headline. I am tempted to throw a suggestion at you though. In other piano methods, you can assume that people will have full blown videos. Maybe you can address such a possible objection in your copy. Why learning without a video is better or something.

HOW DARE YOU CRITICIZE ME!!!!:mad:


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Actually, great suggestion. :)
VitaminD
03-20-2008, 03:55 AM
DId you mean in the main copy or FAQ? If this is the objection, I'd want to address it in the main copy.
AntonTheKhan
03-20-2008, 03:55 AM
HOW DARE YOU CRITICIZE ME!!!!:mad:


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Actually, great suggestion. :)
Lol. Really, you upped the ante greatly on this. Your site was good to begin with, but I felt the copy was a little weak. I think now you are going to get sales.
HalfSwede
03-24-2008, 01:46 AM
Don't know if this is what you are looking for, but just looked at your web site and this JUMPED off the page at me...

In text you say, "Now, you can learn the piano in just four months."

Then immediately below that you say, "...Learn Piano in Just 90 Days!"

Is it 4 months (120 days) or 90 days? I guess given the web site URL is 90daypianist it is the latter. I would just change the text at the top to "...three months" so that it is consistent.

Cheers,
HalfSwede
VitaminD
03-24-2008, 01:55 AM
Don't know if this is what you are looking for, but just looked at your web site and this JUMPED off the page at me...

In text you say, "Now, you can learn the piano in just four months."

Cheers,
HalfSwede

Good call, I will change that - thanks. I wonder why I wrote that.